Year: 2023

Writing

Title

Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T TitleWhat you will be explaining
I IntroductionTell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I Information – Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C Conclusion – Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

 

Title Benefits of living in a 20 minute city
Introduction What is a 20 minute city? A 20 minute city is a small city where everything a human needs (Hospital, supermarket etc) is within a 20 minute walk or bike ride. People think it’s better for the world and some don’t. Let’s do some research shall we.
Information

1st element

The first benefit I think of is people using cars less. Since everything is in a 20 minute walk or bike ride I think people would be more tempted to walk instead of using their car. This would cause pollution to die down if everyone did that because less carbon dioxide and other bad chemicals would be released into the air. Don’t think pollution would end all together. factories would still be releasing bad things into the o-zone. Also it would be healthier for people since people would walk more. 
Information

2nd element

This benefit ties in with the 1st element. It’s pretty simple if you think about it. Since people are using their cars less, less yucky things would be in the air. It would also save people a lot of money by not using their cars as much (Unless you have a Tesla). Gas complaints would go down, everything would be better in a 20 minute city (probably not). You would also stress less than normal which brings us to our next ELEMENT.
q` Mental health. Stress is a key factor in depression which isn’t really good. People would stress less because you won’t have to worry about being late to your job, Your kids being late to school and if they’re old enough you can just tell them to walk since it’s so close. This is probably the best benefit because it can heal you.
Conclusion

SO thats it I hope you understood anything I was saying if not sorry! BYe bye.

 

COuntry project (update)

Last week for literacy we learned about countries. We had to do research slides and pick a country to research about. I chose Russia as it s pretty intresting with things not so normal to how we live in New zealand. I wasn’t here but they all put their posters on display and the ones with the best posters got prizes.

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Speech Reflection

Task Descreption

                                         This is my speech reflection. Its a task to rate yourslef on how you did on your          speech. We had to write how we felt before, during and after the speech. I hope you enjoyed and please leave a positive comment on my blog.