Paste your Suspenseful Beginning into this doc then continue writing the rest of the narrative. Your Suspenseful Beginning should set the tone for the rest of your writing.
Your story should include the following.
- Character dialogue
- Correct punctuation
- Paragraphs
- Descriptive language that includes the senses (see, hear, smell, taste, feel)
Paste your Suspenseful Beginning here and keep writing.
Thunder-bangs-so-loud-it-could-be-heard-from-miles.-Rain-ponders-everywhere-it-smells-like-fear.-He-stands-there-menacingly,-mumbling-to-himself.-He-thenifts-his-head-and-stared-at-the-kid-in-front-of-him.-He-goes-up-to-them,-Footsteps-shaking-the-ground.-he-gives-him-candy-and-walked-away.-He-then-turns-around-and-charges-at-the-kid!-The-kid-screams-echoing-through-the-cold-gloomy-night.-He-grabs-the-child-puts-him-in-the-van-and-rushes-out-of-the-tall-cold-building.The-child-screaming-the-man-silent-staring-into-the-road-with-vicious-intent.
He-tells-the-child-to-be-quiet-and-the-child-becomes-quiet.-He-parks-goes-outside-and-picks-up-the-child-he-walks-him-to-HIS-HOUSE!-The-child-is-happy-and-hugs-the-man-and-says-farewell.